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Just a poem

Susie went on a date,
and found out she was late,
but she didnt want to tell her mate,
because this was her fate,
they walked through the gate,
as fast as they ate,
until she mentioned she was late,
her mate,
asked the date,
then walked through the gate.

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I didnt come up with this at the beginning because tiffany (pipper77) came up with it at school one day so im giving her the credit. all the way up to late. but after that it was my thinkings

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  • llama2
    May 15, 2007
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    Piper77 Oh...yeah i know...so one day we were at lunch and im like 2,4,6,8 and instead of susie you said danielle...me...okay so you did it was just like last week....


  • Piper77
    May 13, 2007

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    Uh, I don't remember coming up with this...I think it might have been Amanda...and my name's Piper77...lol...but thanks for the credit anyway ...it was a good poem...keep writing!

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