Darkness within thoughts
Aiding in the work of the hands
Racing with impulses
Creating masterpieces
Revealing one's heart
A window to their soul
Vengence and valor
Embraced within the spirit
Never parted away, the mind
Author notes
Ok, so i'm going to break this down for you to understand, if at any point i ended up confusing you.
Darkness within thoughts
Aiding in the work of the hands
(my mind adores the darker side of life, and my poetry reflects that)
Racing with impulses
(i write from sparks of inspiration)
Creating masterpieces
(and many of my works are very good, so i've been told)
Revealing one's heart
A window to their soul
(my poetry is an expression of my heart and emotions. it allows people to understand me better)
Vengence and valor
Embraced within the spirit
Never parted away, the mind
(i write often on things that are hurting to the heart, as well as things that are uplifting.. usually i write on lose and love. loss brings vengence most times, valor and love usually always go hand in hand. my spirit has both things, and my mind writes on both.)
I hope that all makes sense now, lol.
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your piece made perfect sense to me without having to read the author's notes. i think you made your points and brought yourself out there very well in your acrostic here. wonderfully written. even though i didn't need the author's notes, it was still an added bonus to me and also a good read. nicely done! keep on writing these acrostics. i like where you take them!
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Ah, a very nice acrostic. I must say I really liked it. It wasn't hard to understand. Thank you for taking the time to enter. Excellent job on this poem and best of luck to you in my contest.
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Very nice write indeed. This was most intriguing. The workings of your mind is very ...... dark...... almost as if there is a demon within pushing the writtings. I really like this write and how it describes you.
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Nice breakdown but not needed. This speakes for itself. Nice write you sound very intriguing
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BRAVISSIMO!!
I relate so completely to this poem, as was pinpointed in the breakdown, and I love that!!! Well done on a fantastic representation of thyself, and arrogantly, myself... I love how it reads, and how I can relate...
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Oh, I always like these name ones and this background is so pretty, too - not at all dark!
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Thank you , darc raven for a wonderful little poem with your comments. I was a little confused, but after reading your comments i went back and read it again and saw it in a different light. I really like works done by people that associate with things they have experienced or seen. Good title to the point. well done.
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Oh! well this is a really pink background! O.O lol.. I really liked the Acrostic, expresses alot of who you are.. A wonderful person...
Angel
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nice take on your name father. I am glad that you have done this.
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nice poem! I relly like it! good work! keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really like ur style of writing! keep it up!
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love it. omg..you've given me a freaking idea on writing poetry now!! YAAAAYYY for travis!!!
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dad this is strange..but meh ur daddy.
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This is breath taking, it's so beautiful and outstanding. Great piece!
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This is one remarkable breakdown on your name. It was understandable in the poem and the fact that you tooked the time to break it down shows you want all readers to understand you and your work.
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~Many Scarlet Applauses and Kisses~
You write brilliantly as always darling. I loved this very much. Just like I love you hee hee.
You accurately described yourself and what you stand for my sweet. My King and brave husband.
"Embraced within the spirit
Never parted away, the mind"
I do believe this is my favorite part.
Besides your whole name of course.
Wonderous...
Just like
YOU.
Lady Blue~
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I like the breakdown of your name. Glad you explained, though your words reflected you very well. Never parted away, the mind..my favorite line.
Good luck in the contest.
(revieling=revealing
Author notes: line 2-lose=loss -
You rock
I must say I do like a great Acrostic ~ you did a great job. The funny thing is when i scrolled down to see your breakdown it was "Ok, I thought that..." To me your poem completely reflected what you intended. (o.Oh i made a rhyme!!!) ... Great job! THANKS for entering my contest, and Nice to meet ya!***** -
This was very good. I had to read due to the fact my Craft Name is Lady Raven and I am very much drawn to the Raven.
Hugs and bites, Vampy
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