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In Our Season


 

was it that long ago
that I found you

the most beautiful flower in the field

you were glorious
a vision in feminine perfection

as lovely a woman, as God had created

we were like children
dancing in the flowered fields of life

enjoying the sun filled times together

and the days passed
almost without knowing

one blending into another, pretending forever

and the seasons changed
so many times, we never even noticed

yet every flower has it season to bloom

and the plush petals in time
will wilt away, and be stained at the edges

still I remember you,  forever as you were

the most beautiful flower in the field
and that time, when we were children

and we were beautiful together

in our season




Leel

Author notes

I made these words for my wife of 25 years, Mary

She was 18 when I met her at a time of human perfection
It has hert my heart to see her age to become fifty

I believe this acceptance is harder for women
they remember all too well, and see the suddel changes

I will always love her
for all she is, and all she has been to me

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  • sapphireangelwings gold member
    June 16
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    Lovely. Your heart just flows from the tip of your pen.


  • xoPJ
    May 18
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    Lovely, Richard. This takes the mind to a pleasant field. The fragrance lingers ~


  • BeautifulFlame gold member
    January 18

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    Rick

    This is such wonderful memories, and its fantastc that you still are great friends. Its very rare these days to keep that as sweet as it was.
    A treasure this should be cherished.
    Beautiful, Beautiful!
    Love
    ~Lisa~
    Congrats


    • Endeavor gold member
      June 2
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      I remember when you used to sign to me

      "Love, Lisa"

      Gone, like some beautiful dream
  • judyjudyjudy
    January 9

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    the seasons changed so many times we never even noticed - what a wonderful line. That's what happens for a while.

    Beautiful write.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    January 8

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    Oh this is such a beatuiful honor poem. I, too am rusty, but I lvoe rusting along together with my sweetheart as well.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 8

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    This is very beautiful Congratulations on the Gold trophy.
    Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest. I wish you the best of luck.

    REDWINGSPIRIT

    • Endeavor gold member
      January 18
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      I am a Red Wing Fan


      I live 50 miles N.W. of Detroit

      Thank you for appreating my words

      Thank you for the H.M.

      Rick

  • raggyann
    December 17, 2007

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    oh my
    any womanwould love to hear these words said to her this was just breath taking
    i just love this poem
    it made me fel so many beautiful things and remember one too


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 17, 2007
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      Hi Ann


      Thank you for seeing into my words

      Your comment was kind

      I appreate the three Smilies

      Rick

  • sensualbutterfly
    October 26, 2007

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    Absolutely BEAUTIFUL. Wow,what a lucky woman to have a man that loves her that way and is not afraid to express it to everyone. Great Write. I loved it


    • Endeavor gold member
      October 26, 2007
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      Butterfly


      Love your picture

      Thank you for saying beautiful
      A poet will say his soul, and give it away in words

      That is all I do in this

      Rick

  • CherryOnTop
    October 25, 2007

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    This is wonderful. You have such a talent for self expression. you are a vey loving and caring man. A real man who is not afraidd to show his true emotions.


    • Endeavor gold member
      October 25, 2007
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      girlish


      Thank you for saying Wonderful
      I can express myself cause I am fairly proven, and trust myself

      You are kind to read me

      Rick

  • Lily otv
    October 13, 2007

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    Twenty five years together is a long time together and the changes are so subtle until one day we realise how different we are but the inner beauty is still there and I think that is what most people view in a life long partner. This poem is a lovely tribute to the love you have shared through the years. The seasons move on but each one holds its own beauty and is there to be enjoyed

  • mysty rain
    September 26, 2007

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    Every line of this devotion is perfect. There is no line of most favorite or least favorite for it is all written with such perfection. Your story of such love and devotion to "the most beautiful flower in the field" is a wonder to read. I have the feeling that she is gone from your life now, if I am wrong please tell me so, and if I have said too much please tell me that too, but I feel you have said all this in honor of your first love who is no longer with you. Your friend forever, Sylvia, aka Mysty Rian


    • Endeavor gold member
      December 17, 2007
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      Sylvia

      You are correct in you close reading of this
      We ended after 25 years
      It was my fault

      Thank you for realy feeling my thoughts
      Sorry I am so late to comment

      Rick
  • John Veinot Sr.
    September 23, 2007

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    Well 50's may not be that hard on all of us, I think 26 was my hardest age. But anyways, back to the poem. This poem took me back to a time when I was 14 and a dear friend of mine, as we shared some of the Summer together and never wanted it to end...Thank you for the lovely morning read as always...


    • Endeavor gold member
      September 23, 2007
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      Sandra


      Thank you for reading me

      Pleased I could take you back

      I appreate your comment

      Rick

  • Dragons Lady
    September 16, 2007

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    What a wonderful tribute to a woman you love. It is true (for me, at least) that I see the changes that take place as I age. This is remarkably tender and caring. You have expressed a love so deep and overflowing with acceptance of the changes of the seasons in our lives. Well done. A majestic piece of work from the heart. Well deserved gold.


    • Endeavor gold member
      September 16, 2007

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      Shadow


      The words for this were almost hard to make

      She is a great woman

      Your comment is beautiful

      Rick
  • nothinghere silver member
    September 8, 2007

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    This is beautiful that a husband can still see the true beauty of a woman after all of the passing years, it is a sign of perfect love and something you should treasure, as you are.... brilliant

    Karen


  • Wind-Spirit silver member
    September 2, 2007

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    breathtaking and captivating with each line! You sure do have such sweet words for your flower!! Nice write, I really enjoyed the beautiful sentiments!

  • patterncrow
    August 11, 2007
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    Good. Real Good

    From the way you write I can tell you know alot (intense). Very mature.

  • patterncrow
    August 11, 2007
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    it? it

  • Athena10
    August 8, 2007

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    Perfectly brilliant! Moving, emotional and superb. Well worth the gold trophy that I see you won, completely deserved.


    • Endeavor gold member
      August 8, 2007
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      Athena


      Thank you for saying Brillant

      I read several of yours, including your latest

      Your lover is a fool

      Rick

  • Jalalbad gold member
    August 6, 2007

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    haunting

    brings this to mind:
    I cannot say what loves have come and gone,
    I only know that summer sang in me
    A little while, that in me sings no more
    And the birds have vanished one by one
    And the trees are more silent than before.
    Smile,
    Judy


    • Endeavor gold member
      August 6, 2007
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      Judy


      Thank you for reading this

      Your comment is poetice in it`s self

      She was a great woman

      Rick

  • azlyn gold member
    August 5, 2007
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    Lovely...words of the heart indeed. A wonderful gift for a beautiful lady.
    Az


    • Endeavor gold member
      August 5, 2007
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      Morning


      Thank you for reading this

      The words were for my first wife of 25 years

      She is and was a treasure

      Rick

  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    May 21, 2007

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    This is so incredibly beautiful and an absolute pleasure to read. You words are wrapped in sincerity and warmth and I was captivated by every single line. Both expressive and touching - thanks for sharing this with me... x Love and light, Butterfly.


    • Endeavor gold member
      May 21, 2007
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      Butterfly


      I am always pleased when you read me

      I thank you for your kind words for my thoughts

      Rick

  • ennovy silver member
    May 17, 2007

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    Once Is Not Enough

    So I came back and read it twice, so very very beautiful are your words....novy

    • Endeavor gold member
      May 20, 2007
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      Envoy


      Thank you for returning to read

      That is a very great complement

      Rick

  • Corinthians13-4
    May 17, 2007
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    Great job. This is so good, so beautiful.

  • wolfspiritguide
    May 17, 2007
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    this is just beautiful. so deserving of the golden shiny. very memorable write.


  • -Ink Artist-
    May 16, 2007

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    Dear friend, I apologize for taking so long to read this piece but I haven't been on much the last several days.

    This is absolutely beautiful! What an endearing and elegant write for your lovely wife. She is indeed a lucky lady to have such sweet, sincere words penned for her. This write is stunning in it's simplicity of emotion, only true love can bring such power from the pen to the page.

    Congratulations on the shiny Gold for this piece! It is undoubtedly most deserving!


    ~Lori


    • Endeavor gold member
      May 20, 2007
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      Lori


      Thank you for the wonderfull and kind word you have said

      I appreate you reading my thoughts

      We are all blessed in our youth

      a time to be treasured

      Rick

  • trista gold member
    May 16, 2007

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    Rick...

    I remember these words. You've used them to do poetic justice to a woman I know you have the deepest respect and love for, even now. I think true love is like that though...it changes...sometimes growing together, and other times taking a couple in different directions...but either way, never losing the basic element of friendship that brought them together in the first place. Congratulations on a very well deserved gold. I love it when you write with a strong metaphor such as in this; it just seems to add so much beauty to your thoughts.

    Wonderful work!
    Much love,
    ~J.


    • Endeavor gold member
      May 20, 2007
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      Trista


      I see in you words an understanding of the depths of love

      There is an endless bond I share with this great woman

      From her body came a child I adore, and our history

      I thank you for seeing my words in the best light

      Your Friend

      Rick

  • poet2angels silver member
    May 14, 2007

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    so beautiful, Rick!
    Truly emotional and very moving...
    This one really touched my heart...

    Lynda


    • Endeavor gold member
      May 14, 2007
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      Linda


      You know how I feel about your writing

      It is am honer to have you read and care for my words

      Rick

  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    May 13, 2007

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    I know how dear Mary is to you and it is amazing how the two of you remained such precious friends. I am sure Mary is just as beautiful as ever no matter how many seasons changed.
    Rick you are such a special person with an very huge heart. You Mr. were picked from the garden of perfection.
    Beautiful piece of art you have here. I hope you let Mary read this.

    Manyblessings2u & yours always
    Love Ya,
    Your Buddy, Your Friend,
    Your Joy, Your Joyce


    • Endeavor gold member
      May 14, 2007
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      Joyce


      I read your comment again, I did not say enough

      I thank you for how you speak of me
      we are all blesed if we have ONE that cares for us
      I have many and I feel it in your words

      Your Friend Rick

    • Endeavor gold member
      May 13, 2007
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      My Joice


      I am with Mary now for Mothers Day
      We are still very close and my daughter lives with her

      We had a nice evening together, she is a great woman
      Thank you for calling this Art

      Love Rick
  • Poet4theSpirit
    May 13, 2007

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    This is lovely

    To have expierenced this feeling, this joy, this elation, yes it is yours to keep forever. I like the metaphor of the stained rose petal brought a clear picture to mind.Your a gentle kinda guy, with a heart and a very special talent.Ths poem is exceptional.


    • Endeavor gold member
      May 13, 2007
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      Hi my friend


      Thank you for caring for my words

      I like the last thing you said to me

      Rick

  • Carly Pop
    May 13, 2007
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    masterpiece

    amazing!!!!!!!!!!1
    I am turning 50, I know how she feels!!!!!!!1


    • Endeavor gold member
      May 14, 2007
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      Hi Carly


      Thank you for feeling my words

      I tried to say a reality of life
      as gently as my words would allow
      and keep the truth within the words

      I too live in this reality
      This is why we so desperatly need an intolectial life

      It keeps us in the future

      Rick

  • Angel With No Halo
    May 12, 2007

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    what a gorgeous thing to write about... a beautiful sentiment. Your words flow so wonderfully and I could feel the beauty of your heart throughout the poem. Thank you for sharing this with me hon. You are an amazing talent.

    ~Krys~

  • passionspenning
    May 12, 2007

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    This is beautiful, to write such loving words of an ex wife, sais much of both of you. You both were blessed to have shared many years together.
    The analogy of the seasons brings this full circle.
    Just lovely, my love.
    all my love,
    your poet


    • Endeavor gold member
      May 14, 2007
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      My Poet..


      I think if we ever truly loved someone
      it will change it`s form before it ever ends

      It was hard for us to accept our new roles to each other
      Now we are able to be friends again in a new way
      It takes a special woman to be this way

      I love how you care for my words and praise the good within

      Love you, Rick

  • Thankfulspirit
    May 12, 2007

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    This is absolutely breathtaking beyond all emotion and beauty....I find myself so humbled to read and experience your words...enjoyed this so much! Smiles, Terry


  • WolfHeart silver member
    May 12, 2007

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    Powerful

    Just lovely - she is a lucky lady to have you.
    Years are only numbers, so I try to forget them and never give in to aging. Your sensitivity is just astounding. I love the way you write.

    Wolfie


  • zochit2me gold member
    May 12, 2007

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    Very sentimental and loving thoughts. Just because we cannot stay together does not mean we should stop loving. I still keep in contact with all the lovers in my life and my heart will remain always a part of them. Beautiful
    Becky


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    May 12, 2007

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    Beautiful and heartfelt words to your wife.
    It's an amazing feeling when you know you have
    found your one and only true love. Nothing can
    change the way that you feel about her. There
    is no such thing as age when you are in love.
    It is everything and timeless perfection.
    I really enjoyed reading this one. Thanks
    for sharing it and I wish you and your wife
    many more years of happiness together!



    Jeremy0826


  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX
    May 12, 2007

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    Beautiful words. I can only say how beautiful one felt when reading them. I wish someone would say them to me!


  • Desire gold member
    May 12, 2007

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    Priceless!!

    Oh My this is a Gem
    Beautiful words to caress the Spirit and send the
    winds fluttering into celestial Wonderland~
    Thank You for sharing the Love You have for this
    other Precious Gem~
    Bless Your Heart and also hers

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • ennovy silver member
    May 12, 2007
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    How Eloquently Beautiful

    You are a very wonderful man to still see into the past, the beauty, love, and youth. You have done this contest a poetic justice by entering...Dynamic, direct, and divine words of love for a lovely lady.
    Written in sublime excellence, beautifully...novy

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