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Beauty is seeing
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That yes, I do have my flaws...
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But loving each one.
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Author notes
it's short, and it is very vague, but i still wanted to enter it :) i think of this each time i look in the mirror and i have a pimple or bags under my eyes, or my hair is really limp, that beauty is seeing your flaws, and loving yourself anyway ;)
kayla*
Written July 27th, 2003
A contest entry
- inner beauty by .
250 points, ended August 13, 2003, 20 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very nice write, enjoyed
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Good
You can't beat short and sweet. Congratulations on bronze trophy.
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Do Not Touch It!
AWWWWW So short and sweet and YES I agree with wolfbane..SUCH A powerful lil message..man..everyone is beautiful in their own ways..and well they should respect themselves because that is the true meaning of beauty..Man I loved this poem..soo cute and soo *WOW* hehe..well you picked the right words for the right places..that's also another way that it turned out so good..hehe thanx so much for sharing! You did a great Job! Keep up the wonderful work!
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Bravo!!!!! Short but with an awesome message. Powerful little piece hun. So unconditional and true, the way life and beauty should be held view. Amazing piece.
best of luck in the contest honey
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very short, but an awesome poem, i agree with mikaela no one who has entered this challenge has tried that view point... excellent view of knowing that nothing i perfect but loving it anyway. Most peoplee can't bring themselves to accept themselves as they are, when EVERYONE is beautiful in their own way... awesome job kayla!
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I agree with Rennie~
If this is really true you have indeed learned a valueable lesson
Nicely done sis
Love it
Good luck in the contest
Luv ya
Susan~~~~~
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Girl....if this is really the truth , you have learned a valuable lesson at a very young age . Acceptance of self { flaws and all } has to come before we can be tolerant of others and their shortcomings Great words and good luck!
Reenie
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wow, no one has actually used this idea yet. its different but when you think about it, it all makes sense... perfection is something that is impossible to reach and no matter how hard we try, we will always have our flaws.... accepting them is the first step in being happy with what we are
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