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Green

I'm green with nausea
These feelings weren't suppossed to be so complicated
I'm green with naivity
Life wasn't suppossed to be so hard
This green feeling of a new life
Of regaining innocence after
Breaking one's heart
After breaking free
Only to be chained up from
My own worst enemy
My sticky jealousy, green envy

Can happiness be so easy
Like walking on green grass
Barefoot and tearless
Yet this pain is rooted from deep within my green veins
Cause I'm never satisfied with what I have
My jealousy never seems to subside

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  • drowning in u
    June 23, 2007
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    Jackie, this is beautifully written. It's a hard feeling to describe without sounding selfish, but I definitely think you've done it. If I am interpretting this correctly, I can undoubtedly say I've been there, and it sucks, but this seems like it was a great outlet, and definitely a great read. Good Job!

  • cassiopeia
    May 24, 2007

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    i'm going to write a poem in response to this one. i really want to. it inspires me. its such a good idea. you've grown so much