My Adam,
A whisper of passion caresses
my locks of golden waves,
As fingers of pure energy
tantalize my entire being,
Your raw animalistic energy
fills me with a tune of Heaven,
A tune I am unaccustomed to...
The kind that brings the sky
to this planet’s level
and shakes you to the core
Leaving you exhausted ~
Yet full of universal beauty
My body shakes for your touch...
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My Lovely Eve,
Before this feast of life be over,
I shall bring you willingly
to a place of awe ~
Indulge your ultimate
In consensual fantasies
Crafting them in the stone of reality ~
Taking you to a place where
you need not worry, nor fear ~
For I shall always ~
ALWAYS be here...
Lending my touch to
My Beautiful Princess
© Jeff(ro)J Kelly 2007
JJK1204072130
Author notes
Master Maddogk [lol]
In a list
A contest entry
- SENSUAL WHISPERS....THE ART OF SEDUCTION by Seductive Whisperer.
875 points, ended June 8, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Incredible!!!
Wow this is new from you Daddy J. This subject matter I mean. lol, Very calming and beautiful, makes me think of you as a God creating this Adam and Eve, you put so much sincerity and honesty in your poems. Quite a rare and unusual thing. I love this idea though? Thank your muse for me on this one kk?
~Tessy
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Outstanding
This poem manages to combine sensuality with gentleness. I loved the language and imagery you chose. This was seductive and full of caring.
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This is certainly an excellent poem, a real paradise. I especially like the phrase "Taking you to a place where you need not worry, nor fear" With this poem, you've taken me to a place of awe. You're a terrific poet Jeffro, I'm always happy to read your poems. I'm glad I know you. Jeff Rowe (an Aussie at heart)
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Master Jeffro strikes again!
I must say, I'm just a little (more than that) blown away. This is incredible, and definitely what I think I was looking to read tonight.
It's fun to see someone use Adam&Eve in a different light, as I generally use them in my less-than-positive sort of writes.
-Allura
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This one makes me think of a soft breath in the wind. The sense of love with a light air of lust.. Wonderful job!
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whoa, my friend this is something else, i loved it, this read was amazing, you did a just strong and passionate job on this, keep it flowing
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What a beautifully expressed piece of poetry. A delightful pleasurable write. Your words are so soothing and beautifully constructed. Excellent jeffro. Thanks for sharing your poetic self with us.
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Excellent write jeffro. very sensual and heartfelt. you have expressed a lot of passion with this write. Adam and Eve, their first encounters of pleasing each others needs would have been great to behold. Thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest.
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My Adam/My Eve...inspiring love story of the world first couple...I too recently wrote a poem about Adam & Eve...lovely and senusal,great flow and content! ~Sie
Good luck in your contest.
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Sigh......How awesomely and wonderfully beautiful this is!
Seduction can be so beautiful; so awesomely intimate and you wrote this in the most awesome way!
All the best to you, my friend! -
Well the contest is the art of seduction, in this case I think you already have gold.... lol What a fantastic portrayal of the Adam and Eve story, it was seductive, sultry and passionate.... wonderful hun...
Karen
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