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My future life.. In school talk.

My life is passing by
middle school, here i come!
homework, welcome!
here comes my freedom!
Starting out with sixth grade
then passing my life to seventh
then be the big dog in eighth
so now i am leaving middle school
High School..
I am not sure about
my cousin makes it seem like lots of fun
and so i feel like i have no doubt
As soon as I know it
I'll be a senior in high school
then i will get to go to college!
and then there wouldnt be stupid rules
Finishing 5th
moving to sixth
then to seventh
next to eighth
Welcome high school
into my life
starting with nineth
moving to twelveth
College, college
is the goal i'm going for
pretty soon its time to go to WVU!
and kiss mom and dad then go out my freedom door

Do you think this makes sense? Tell me where and why.

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  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    May 16, 2007

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    I love this! I felt the same way when I was younger. I was always ready to get out of school. So this made a lot of sense to me...ALL OF IT! You did a great job! Keep it up and continue penning!