Waters crash beneath,
Becoming tranquil, peaceful.
Calm after the storm.
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Waters crash beneath,
Becoming tranquil, peaceful.
Calm after the storm.
Thank you for entering my ku contest. This haiku does a very good job of describing the contrasts of a waterfall. -
An ideal description of a waterfall. Well done!

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You have truly mastered haiku's...... very nice
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That is nice. I love waterfalls and what you say here is so true.


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Short, simple, sweet, and yet, it incorporates a lot into it, some small and beautiful imagery, even from something so small i pictured so much, well done hun

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