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Waterfall

Waters crash beneath,
Becoming tranquil, peaceful.
Calm after the storm.

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  • Pollycheck
    December 14, 2007

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    Waters crash beneath,
    Becoming tranquil, peaceful.
    Calm after the storm.

    Thank you for entering my ku contest. This haiku does a very good job of describing the contrasts of a waterfall.

  • mauliz
    June 8, 2007
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    An ideal description of a waterfall. Well done!

  • Deepredvelvet
    May 20, 2007
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    You have truly mastered haiku's...... very nice


  • Swan song gold member
    May 13, 2007
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    That is nice. I love waterfalls and what you say here is so true.


  • Illusionaire Moderators member
    May 12, 2007

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    Short, simple, sweet, and yet, it incorporates a lot into it, some small and beautiful imagery, even from something so small i pictured so much, well done hun

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