Droplets pelt my pane,
Strong East winds bully the trees,
Sky begins to groan.
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This is absolutely magnificent, Your strong suit is definitely Haiku's.
You should send a few to ArkBear, he would like them I'm sure. -
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I'd feel weird sending random messages to a poet I don't know going,
"Read my poetry! Apparently I'm great!"
It's a bit odd, don't you think?
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"Bully the trees" this is good, real good.
Your strong point seems to be Haiku's.
You should send a few to ArkBear, he would like them, he is the Poetry master around here.
and these are truly masterful.
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Droplets pelt my pane,
Strong East winds bully the trees,
Sky begins to groan.
Thank you for entering my ku contest. This is a very vivid description of a thunder storm. -
Nice imagery, metaphor, pun, personification.
Jam packed.
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Very good you painted a nice pciture of a storm in my mind and did it clearly with only three lines.
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dramatic !
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