A scolding for not eating fruit
A praise for doing well
A thanks for picking something up
That's lying in the way
Some toffee from that pretty tin
To follow medicine
A special dinner just for me
A pudding following
I want to thank you for all this
You've given me so far
For being kind and firm and good
And staying who you are
A smile of neverending thanks
A bright sun just for you
A hug to show my gratitude
A bunch of flowers too
Author notes
For my mother - Happy Mothers' Day
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Comments
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Aww what a sweet poem - I'm sure your mom loved it.
You've done the rhyming very well, and this also flows smoothly, nothing to criticize here.
Thanks for sharing, keep up the great work!
Annie 
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