I thought I was threw with it
I thought I was through with you
but how you left me on the ground
completely shattered by your cruelty
keeps running through my mind
I can't enjoy her company
because what you did to me
is stuck in my mind and won't go away
and you tell me to be happy
you say you want to see me smile
well I'm *bunny*ing smiling at you
but behind it is my desire to scream
to scream out the venom that was
broken off into my flesh
I can't enjoy the smell of her perfume
because I know it's bittersweet
all of this is
lurking around the corner of my heart
is that dreaded empty word
that has left me battered and bruised
and my fears hold me back from it
my fears hold me back from anything
and everything that could mean happiness
so I've broken it off now
so i won't have to waste my time
or hers, it wouldn't be worth it
would it, you tell me
you know all about breaking hearts
don't you darling
Author notes
this is what i believe to be one of my best. i hope you like it. i'll post my other for you as soon as possible. my name is XxtragicaffairxXMCR
A contest entry
- Are you scared of falling in love again? by Clinging-to-Life.
300 points, ended May 17, 2007, 18 entries
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Wow there is so much pain and so much anger in this poem. All well expressed with out being over powering. Thanks for entering and good luck!!
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I was going to say I liked certain parts, but I cant because I love the whole thing. It's great. Such emotion, and pain, rage....this was great. I can relate to this peice. Thank you for entering
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Love it.
I definitely love when you say: all of this is lurking around the corner of my heart is that dreaded empty word that has left me battered and bruised.
keep writing, this poem is amazing.
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I like it..
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i love this i could relate of course its a blonde thing lol but i like it alot
I thought I was threw with it
I thought I was through with you
these two lines kept me there the whole time just thinking
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