You appear to me
In my mirror of dreams....
So come walk with me
To places soaring high above
That which both transcends earth and sky
Waiting...
Waiting there my love for you and I~
Come drink with me the nectar of our love
While we explore the labyrinth of sweet joy
Let's leave behind the chains that would confine us
And fly to passions warm and glorious heights
While the gods of love create our paradise
And weave and conjure their romantic spells
By two hearts that beat as one
The magic of the moment engulfs and captivates us
And would halt all else and takes us to celestial realms~
So come with me my love
To that place of ecstasy
Where time stands still
And love's sweet moment lasts
For all eternity~
And all of this happens...
Because you appear to me
In the mirror of my dreams~
A contest entry
- My First Picture Contest by Ethereal One.
900 points, ended May 20, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was wonderful
You caught the romantic essence in it, and kept the longing feeling throughout
I never lost interest once
The last stanza was wonderful, it seems like the person loves it, having this mirror of dreams
Becasue she can be with this man in the mirror, her dream
This was beautiful, I felt it touch me
Well done
All my love
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How beautiful. So romantic and filled with sweet tender emotion. This should be published. It flows with and from the picture so well. Wonderfully written. Congratulations on the Honorable win.
Jeannie
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Wow...this is so romantic. And I loved...
So come with me my love...
to that place of extasy..
where time stands still..
and love's sweet moment's lasts..
for all eternity...
I think this could have bin a silver too..but maybe she just run out of it....
If I could I would give you xtra clappies
but I can't
So I give you three of these for the honorable mention
XXJeannette
btw
it's nice to meet you too
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Amazing,
I really enjoyed this well written and emotionally powerful write. I really enjoyed it. I really liked the last stanzas, it pulls it all together perfectly! Great write my friend!
-Amber
Nice to meet you as well
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Reminds me a bit of the "Lady of Shallot" for she too looks into a mirror.
Nice romantic poem. It's filled with longing and passion.
Personally, I'd remove some of the "and's" and "so's" Especially the very last "and." I think it would read better.
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The mirror of my dreams.. now that is a deep concept! Beautiful job, sweet sister, and best of luck in the contest. Luv, ♥ Belle
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Reflections
When you look in the mirror, what you see may or may not be real, and when you look at the person standing next to you, they might not be real, either. And when you look at yourself...there might be some doubt there as well.
Too few of us are real, and too many are fakes...and, it would seem, we all go looking for love in all the wrong places. Find love within yourself, then look in the mirror...
Very nice write, keep make us thinking.
Brazos
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beautiful expression
Your words express the deep emotions she is feeling as she dreams of being with her love. I really like the romantic mood you have created in this poem.
This is such a beautiful stanza:
"So come with me my love
To that place of ecstasy
Where time stands still
And love's sweet moment lasts
For all eternity~"
Thank you for entering this contest, and good luck!
Aurora 2012
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a really wonderful poem, filled with sensitivity and romantic feelings ... you expressed the essence of all human desire so perfectly : to reach the ecstasy of eternity through transcending the dimension of time ... when we are fully present to this moment, we can touch this timelessness ... and the peacefulness that comes with it ...
thank you for this graceful reminder,
marion
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beautifully written
Love poems always make me smile,we tend to dream more as we grow older and see more than we ever dreamt..mirrored images flow as we want, good job sis, good luck..and smile!! mm -
Very romantic!
Loving thoughts in this romantic, imaginative poem. Very nicely done, Sis! Good Luck in the contest!
Love Ya!
♥ Maureen
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See my big smile?
This is a beautiful poem filled with delightful imagery! 
Such fine lines of love... Your poetry continues to be elegant and filled with radiant thoughts.
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What dreamers we are! This is a sweet invitation to a special one held in mind and reflected in the heart. It doesn't have the usual artistry of metaphor that some of your poem do, and it has a capacity for such imagery in nearly every line, which could let the reader draw his/her own feelings into it a bit more, if you are so inclined.
Feel better, Sis. Much love to you!
Karen
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Precious!!
This is one Precious piece penned and Love the emotions You exude from Your Heart
Beautiful images!!
How can one resist that offer
Best wishes to You in the contest
Loved this one!
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Beautiful
Wow sis. You created an incredible love story with this poem It is so touching. Good luck in the contest.
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