you become numb when looking into the eyes of the beholder
thou shalt not move, if so then die
no one will live to tell the tale and no one will ever hear the cries
they pearce ur flesh with whips from the crucifix
oh trust me, they'll make it so you cannot be fixed
instantly numb with one look into the eye
behold a series of pain
while another takes a try
screaming for mercey, no one will hear the cry
while in a minute
DEATH MEETS YOUR EYE
Author notes
this is a song i started to write for the band
In a list
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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welcome to allpoetry
yes, it is quite good. I am wondering how it will flow for a song. You have some great wording here and I especially like the way you ended it.
~Kristy -
very good
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