Redolent
Red roses
Pleasing patio perfume
Author notes
Alliterative.
In a list
A contest entry
- Another Word Prompt by AliceinPoetryLand.
450 points, ended May 11, 2007, 10 entries
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They are. I love Roses, especially red ones. That's why I have my username. After all my birthday is the same day as Robbie Burns and one of his most famous poems is a Red Red Rose, so it reminds everyone of me. Plus I've been described like a rose, nice to look at and a symbol of hope and love, but so easily a sign of something wonderful carrying something bad and someone who will hurt if they have to.
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My senses can smell your thoughts here.
Thanks for sharing and keep on writing my friend.
VIRGOAN -
patio perfume doesn't make much sense to me, maybe i am missing the meaning completely, but it seems as if you are trying to hard to come up with a p word, rather than something that makes sense? ...forgive me if i'm missing something, good luck to you
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very good
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Beautiful. I can smell those roses from here. This brings back some lovely memories for me also. Thanks so much for entering.
Gaylene
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This is a wonderful use of the word prompt, "perfume." Your haynaku is so well written, and I can smell those beautiful roses. Good luck in the contest!
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