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Thirteen

Look to me for nothing,
Understand I can't be here
Close your doors quickly
Knowing dangers lurks near
Yet I fear (feel) nothing
That hasn't been felt
Hundreds of times before.
I know this is your game
Reaping me no rewards.
To tell the truth I'm quite tired
Each time your call comes,
Every ring is a sign
Nothing will be good again....

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  • My Darkness
    May 14, 2007
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    hmmm... this is brutal, whomever it's to, good write thought.. a lot of emotion!


  • Lj-
    May 12, 2007
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    Very cool with the acrostic-ness.
    Like the feelings.


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