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Ink Me Out

My words spill over my lips with the grace of broken glass
I read through every word that I had written
It is beautiful
It is full
It is life

Thinking back over heartache I reach for my pen
my lifeline
My only living friend

Skating around on the pages
So filled with lies and decite
The ink slides over as I watch the candle light flicker
It beckons me to the words I want to write down

The very heart beat in my chest slows down
As I think about the times I want to record
the art is in the words
The words are crafted in the letters
The letters come from my mind

I rock back and forth against that old,red pillow
Toying with thoughts that yearn for paper and its comfort
The escape for my thoughts are lying there;
A thin strip of release that calls for me

The time passes as I walk
through the remminisent plagues of regrets
The poetry of irony
The ironys of it all
It consumes through my body as I scribble down hopes
My heart to paper as I let go of the pain that has held me
Hostage for so long

This thing
This art
Engulfing my thoughts as I cry to little blue lines
Intriguing speech prettied up and beauified
Made into my own work

The sole survivior of things I want to forget
Held into folders of things I love
The memories I write have saved me
Saved me from myself
This act of mindless thoughts placed so carelessly on record
This is my life
My death
My reason to live
The day I found poetry
I found myself
Wrapped up in plastic
Ready to write

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  • karabi
    June 20, 2007
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    'My reason to live'- very well said.


  • Ryno
    June 13, 2007

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    Excellent piece; enjoyed this write. Though I want to shoot it for the typo I found please fix, good emotions and vibe to this. Great write thanks for the entry.

    Ryan


  • poet2angels gold member
    May 17, 2007
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    wonderful imagery and great emotion expressing the love of poetry...
    TY for entering
    Lynda


  • a means to an end
    May 17, 2007

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    this was so great. i really liked the way if flowed and the rythem. i especially like the last lines because i fell like i can totally relate to them. great write


  • JesusFreakNBandGeek
    May 11, 2007
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    Wow. This is great. I'm jealous. I cant put into words what I feel so I cant write. Good job.

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