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Shame

S tuttering, I look away from you
H ating myself for what I've done
A any punishment you give me I deserve
M ay you hurt me as I've hurt you...
E ven then I will not feel worthy.

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  • grannyeri gold member
    May 16, 2007

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    Makes one wonder what is making you feel this way - what could one have done to feel this shame? Liked this acrostic short poem you have penned here.