The news comes so fast,
It hits me like a wall,
I didn’t know him,
Didn’t really like him,
But shock is cold,
Like ice in the pit of your abdomen,
Ice that burns a hole through your spine,
Bless him
Be him,
Guide him,
Shock.
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my moms friend died...
Please tell me what you think
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death sucks
i hate death.
in the last couple school years we have lost like 4 or 5 students due to accidents and its just really painful to deal with, even if i dont know the person i ball my eyes out because death is so un-enjoyable. your poem is very easy to relate to because i think everyone out there has had to deal with death one way or another. especially with hearing about war on the news everyday...
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verty true
death is an uninvited guest and it could visit any of us,and i know your feelings. take care my friend.
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Sorry to hear this. It must be quite shocking.
My condolences.
Brian
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