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Roses of Echos

Roses of Echoes

By: Julia L. Clark

 

 

 

The echoes of your scent flowing through my nose

like the sweet memories of yesterday.

Ooh father to my soul

please tell me that those rose petals

that you want me to walk on

represents that I am royalty

to the throne of you heart

and those strawberries

are for the sweet passion of your endless love for me.

The echoes of your voice

is driving me to a never ending freeway

that I am scared to speed on,

can I slow down

so I can travel the right mission to you

I am frighten

so scared to smell your earthly scents.

Should I take the short pathway

and pay attention to each u-turn.

The scent of your rose petals

I am not use to perceiving.

Don’t walk away from me now

please don’t close your doors,

I am not bitter

Are

destroyed anymore.

I know the value of my self worth

and you are my highest bidder.

Throw me in to these rose petals

and love me with out the exception of intercourse.

Stroke my hand

embrace me,

sleep with your arms

wrapped around my waist.

Love me right now

and don’t forsake me

because a lot of my willing participants has.

Not knowing that

I am just as pure as diamonds

And as soft as a mother

brushing up against a sandy shore.

I am forceful as a knife

cutting through flesh

and as fearless as a shooting bullet

aiming with no name.

The bad batch of roses

has been delivered to my heart

is the one to blame.

I open my heart of shame

And I take my destiny of hurt and pain

and give you my trusted palms,

all night in your room

you sung so passionately then we twisted tongues.

These rose petals you lay me in

represents the passion of your love for me,

I am falling down

catch me

I can’t even breathe.

I am seizing this moment

Do you except my high drive

my high classed morals,

If so my lips of heat just unfold them.

The echo of my king knows that

through the vowels we set forth

he is half my earth

and I am the continuing of his.

He know right now

he better forget about Michelle

Liz,

And Kim.

If I cant see beyond these roses that

this here man is not a sexual fling

for tonight with no hopes of his tomorrow.

I need faith

not your pity

And Your toilet flush sorrows.

Can you love me like delicious food to my stomach?

Can you deal with my anger times

even when I will make you vomit?

Can you admit that you was the one

that stood by the thickness of your hatred

loosing hope like you couldn’t cope no more.

The ashes of rose petals

Has been thrown in to the ocean of Pacific love

Swimming free

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© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

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  • MahoganyFlow
    July 19, 2007

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    Go head Julia! You had some powerful lines in this. I love this. It was beautifully written. Keep Writing girl!


  • Jamaica
    July 16, 2007
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    Music 2 My Mind

    This was a fabulous poem. U r talented.


  • kennethlaney
    July 16, 2007

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    Excellent poem

    I almost made it all the way to the end saying how sweet Julia is and she must be imagining a new love interest to calm her down - AND THEN BOOM there was Julia talking TRASH! I love some of your sweet poetry that turns wild in the end! You need an old man to romance you! You are a ROMANTIC at heart and you need someone that will romance you AND THEN rock you to sleep gently! Love you!
    "BOO"


  • darell
    July 16, 2007

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    Sacred Enchantments!

    Julia you paint the skies with unimaginable beauty.
    Your words soar like white doves across the heavens.
    Your insatiable pain digs deep beneathe the earth
    of discontent. Yet love survives and conquers all. Seeds of new birth are growing inside your heart.
    You only need yeild to them. For they hold the magic
    of a better world that awaits your presence.
    Lady Enthralling you are so beautiful!
    Peace and Blessings,darell


  • Candy6
    June 21, 2007
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    Kool

    This poem is cool to me because I like your describing things in your unique poem. Nice dedication.


  • TwiztidMaggot
    May 30, 2007

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    great job!

    I like this! LOVE ME, DONT FORSAKE ME CAUSE A LOT OF MY WILLING PARTICIPANTS HAS. that's my favorite line in this! great write... and thanks for the comment on my othe poem... I have a lot more... I'm just not putting them up just yet... I have to wait for a while... just so I know what exactly I'm doin... but yeah, great job... and I'm sure that you all will be able to inspire me even more! agian, thanks!


  • May 17, 2007

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    you are so so truly gifted your words are so inspirtionaly i must say you put your stories togather very well i must say. i must come check u out at the red cat jazz club.


  • Clinging-to-Life
    May 17, 2007

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    this was a very well written,GREAT peice. Though I do think if you spaced it out more, so its not written in so much of a story form, I think that would have made it flawless. thank you for entering.


  • Blaque01
    May 14, 2007
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    Different

    This is more the kinda work i usually write, i can feel each fascet of the picture u painting here


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      May 15, 2007
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      O So Tha Means....

      We do have something else in common besides writing we can share a lil of the same smile are u on


  • Lost In Dreaming
    May 13, 2007

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    Wow--i really cant think of anything to say its is so beautiful and i think flawless. For some reason it reminded me of Dirge Without Music though i have no clue why.


  • Brazos silver member
    May 13, 2007

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    I loved it!

    Julia, it is apparent from reading this that you are used to presenting your poems vocally, I don't have a problem with that! I'm just glad that you have a voice...this is the first I have read of your poems, and I will read many more! I am from Houston as well, and, YOU KNOW WHAT!! I appreciate your speaking! So, please, keep'em coming!

    Unless I read it wrong [please let me know if I do], your write here is about the failure of love in the first part, and the renewed, successful love in the second part. That means to me that there is always hope around the corner, and we can't dwell on the past, do you think?

    My favorite line is: "I LOVE YOU FROM THE MUSCLE THAT PUMPS MY LIFE , I LOVE YOU WITH MY BEING." That pretty much says it all....

    You are a beautiful poet, thank you,
    Brazos


  • staticgrace
    May 12, 2007

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    A very beautiful and moving piece

    I especially liked the line 'THE ECHO OF YOUR VOICE WIPES THE TEARS OF THIS ALL AWAY.' However, it's quite hard to read formatted like this with no spaces between verses and quite long lines. A powerful write!!

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