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[ falling, ]

falling,
crawling,
on my knees.
thats how it ended the last time
now you really expect me
to go through it again?
when all you get is pain in the end?
he looked me in the eyes
and whispered words
which eventually turned to nothing
but lies
"you are the only one"
i was a fool to fall for him,
and i never want to do it again.
but then theres you
youve been there all along
and i never really noticed
how YOU were the one holding me
when he was nowhere to be found;
gone.
you held my hand in the dark
and wiped away my tears
but i dont want to risk
what we have now
i dont want to see you
on your knees, like i once was
or maybe how i will be again
so please dont get any closer....
i dont know how long
i can keep me inside....

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  • Clinging-to-Life
    May 17, 2007

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    this is sad

    this is sad, and intense. I appreciate the message being sent here. it was well written with much thought put into it. It is as if you are speaking from your heart. I really like it. good job