What I want to do now
Is peel the shirt off your silkiness of your body
To hear the whisper of your name across my throat
The hush of smooth fabrics hitting the floor
You caressing my body with your fingertips
Drinking in your kisses
Being consumed by the fire that burns heavily into your black eyes
The pinching on my thighs as you roughly remove my panties
As I feel the glide of your fingers into the heat of my need
As the sensation roams over me
What I want to do now
To kiss your sensuous lips
Hear my name as I whisper my love along your body
Feel the heat as my hand brushes your skin
The tickle of my hair caressing your silkness
Hear you gasp my name as my mouth closes in
To feel your release and know that your powerless
What I want to do now
Is for us to become one
To move together to the beat of our own drum
Doing the dance that only true lover knows about
The rhymic beating of our hearts as we move together as one
What I want to do now
Is feel the release of both our bodies
As the sweat trickles down
Wrapped is silkness of the sheets
The cloud of our lovemaking hangs in the air
As well as the sheets
As well as each other
As our love grows with each passing day
What I want to do now
Is just to be with you
In a list
A contest entry
- Subtle erotica tastefully written by Naridill.
650 points, ended May 17, 2007, 11 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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WOW! I like!
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Well I have read a lot of great poems and I wanted the finalist pick the winners.....now I'm not saying I want you to read every finalist but if you could read some poems and let me know if you think you should win let me know also thansk
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I like this it ie really good
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Awww this is such a cute poem especially the ending "As our love grows with each passing day
What I want to do now
Is just to be with you" i like those lines -
thanks to everyone for entering, this will be a hard one to judge, i never imagined id have this many entries! just to let you know i will be judging the poems over the next few days, and i have picked some finalists. to all the finalists, i will make another round (or more) of comments, and see how the judging will go from there. stay tuned for updates
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Second line is awkward might flow better without the 2 'yours', other than that I am off to find my towel!
Love, C
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hot and sensual. nice write.
thanks for entering my contest and good luck
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I am so sorry but I must be fair, I have to remove your poem from my contest. One of the rules is no more than 25 lines, I was dissapointed because I have not had many sensuos or erotic entries and I would like more. So if you happen to have a shorter poem please enter it. thank you and also I have another contest called "no more tears giggles only please" Same rules apply on that one I just want to laugh please feel free to enter.
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Well you certainly let be know what it is you want in this write. Thanks for entering.
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I like this. Its sweet, sexy, erotic, and well written. The descriptions and flow of the piece is beautiful. You're lucky to have found someone you care this much about. This makes me feel lonely and miss my boyfriend lol. Great Write.
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Works for me.
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