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Think About It...

subliminal.
the call of flesh.
the means into it.
the craving for.

i'm an open casket at a funeral that never ends.
all i dream of is dirt.
it's smothering me.

life's an infomercial.
telling people what to need.
and then selling it to them.
gadgets that don't ever work the way they're supposed to. satisfaction promised, but not guaranteed.

executables.
we are happening.
bit by bit.
to each other.
we happen.
testing the dark corners of memory.
physical and theoretical.
running.
loud and manic with scissors in our hands.

burning.
because burning makes it permanent.
and moments are so delicate.
intangible.
easily corrupted.
what once was viable lost.
lost because we are.
want to be.

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  • Moon Raven
    August 22, 2007

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    This is a pretty deep poem. Very true as well. You have an interesting style. Unique. That's always a good thing. Good job. I'll have to read more when I have the time.


  • the-gifted
    May 11, 2007
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    aww. that is another great poem.