(Verse 1)
My heart is drowning in crimson tears
My heart aches for you
The agony I faced
When I found out you weren't alone
(Chorus)
My heart is drowning
with thoughts of us
Together forever
Forever Together
(Verse 2)
Life doesn't seem to matter
Cuz darkness surrounds me
This empty hole in my heart
Should be filled with your love for me
(Chorus repeat 2x)
(Chant translate into french and Latin)
English:My life is a bottomless pit without you in it 3x
French :Ma vie est un puits sans fond sans toi dans elle
Latin: Meus vita est a bottomless vorago vacuus vos in is
(Chorus repeat 2x)
If only you were mine 2x
Author notes
This a song me and a friend wrote. its the first we wrote together so it might not be prefect
Serena
A contest entry
- HOW LYRICAL ARE YOU? by SecretMe15.
750 points, ended May 21, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - depression or dark love by Darkened eyes.
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Comments
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This is great to read i liked the first 3 couruses, not so sure about the last bit. A great write well done
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I didn't feel this. These lyrics weren't too good. It just didn't flow and it was really short. It didn't seem like you thought it out before you wrote it.
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