Black and white oblivion
( cords bound around each lifeless limb )
suspended me
in unassuming assurance
Until,
Grounded by discretion's years
(strength ever quickening)
I now must muddle through
and distinguish grays for myself.
In a list
A contest entry
- Super Quickie - Triple 15 by Ryno.
300 points, ended May 11, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Black and White by Pisces Pieces.
875 points, ended June 8, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I love CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. Any suggestions?
Comments
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It certainly does make you sit and think about things. Things are not simply black and white, but now too many shades of gray.
I have no constructive criticism, sorry, I think this is very well expressed and has a deep and powerful message. Not a thing need be changed.
Thank you for entering.
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Creatively worded, I really enjoyed they way you decided to phrase this topic. It is very interesting to mull over and is powerful some how. Thank-you for your entry.
~Ryan~
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