There are so many things inside,
I can't find the words to release my pain.
I'm overwhelmed and stressed to the max,
Unsure what to do, how do I know what's real?
It's just one shit strom after another,
Each time stealing a string of hope.
Smashing my strength and leaving me to suffer,
No one cares to see behind my fake lies.
They all believe that i'm fine but I'm far from okay,
I'm always stuck in the middle fogrotten.
Always the one no one listens to,
They find it easier to tuck me away in dark.
My blade is the only one who can give me solace,
The words are to hard to find anymore.
Music can't even allow me to feel neither,
I'm numb to all my emotions and slowly fading.
I'm spinning in the lowest point of my life,
I want to go back on an ecstacy trip and never return.
I want to loose myself in the gloriousness of being stoned,
Float to a land with rainbow coloured pills.
No longer can I stand on my feet and smile,
All that matters are pills and blades.
Fuck the world and their power trip,
I'm never comming back, these pills are my last goodbye.
Author notes
this is a poem that i wrote about missing my favorite drug of all time ecstacy and a poem about cutting to and just basically the way that i feel in life right now.
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This is a great write, I can relate fully. I know most people must say that but you've just wrote my life at the moment in a poem. I love the fact it doesnt rhyme yet its still rythmitic...great work x
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This is very deep. You have pain running deep within your veins. Writting always helps. I know it does for me.
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Hey hun this is a great poem and i can TOTALLY relate to this its hard I know but put us 3 together and we can do it U know im always here for ya!!
Love ya hun (BFF)
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Good Write.
I really like this!!! Its so emotional and its so real!! U almost really made me feel ur pain but no one can completely feel someone elses pain because its not theirs!! I like it anyways!!!
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WOW!!
I really felt your pain and could relate to it because I'm a cutter and was addicted to prescription drugs. But, your words were very powerful and the overall poem is just an inspiration to me. Great Write
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Incredibly Dark But Excellent
I'm spinning in the lowest point of my life,
I want to go back on an ecstacy trip and never return.
I want to loose myself in the gloriousness of being stoned,
Float to a land with rainbow coloured pills.
I can really relate to that gloriousness of being stoned part because I do that myself quite often with pot. But any ways this is a very deep intense poem and yet although your writing style is dark and quite deadly I really find myself enjoying it. Great poem and just an all round awesome poem. when you write dark you were not kidding! Keep up the Great work.
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I'm going to be critical here. There isn't much thought put into the flow of the poem, its just a rant split up into lines. Although this is one of your better poems, you need to work a bit more on them.
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Hmm, this seemed different to other ones of yours i've read, but still very good. I loved the imagery you used, it provoked a lot of emotion.
Well Done,
Keep It Up,
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wowwwwwwwwwww great poem i love it loadssssssssssssssss
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Interesting.
I have to admit that your form here is.. interesting, to say the least. There were a few stanzas and lines that I had to go and re-read, due to the syntax of the phrase, or just the strange way you worded it. All in all, however, it was good.
I'm not going to preach about how cutting/drugs are a blessing or a curse -- that's for each individual to decide. At least you had the corage to explain how you're feeling.
♥ Victoria.
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