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my twisted poem that i dedicate to the man who helped kill Patrick(long title) Joshua Stevens

I see your blood,
and I grin.
I see your pain
I will do it again.
Your life is falling away,
Just like how you helped him die.
I will asist you in your last breath.
He was your best fucking friend,
So you left him?
You are such a peice of shit.
You hepled kill my love,
My life.
I cant believe you could even say that.
Say that you were unaware.
YOU WERE THERE WHEN HE DIED!!!
He was under the water,
Isnt that anymore of a clue?
That is a sign of help.
Oh, how I count down your days.

Author notes

Joshua Stevens was Patricks best friend, and He left Patrick to die becuz he said he was unaware that Patrick was gone. Wouldnt you notice if you went somewhere with your best friend and left without them?

Sorry...I am not that crazy

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  • ChemicalArtemis
    May 14, 2007
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    oh...
    *hugs you*


  • I Luciferi
    May 14, 2007

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    That is pretty fucked up.... I hope that in a time of need, somebody leaves him for dead so he knows what it is like to be abandoned.

    -David

    P.S.- I am your dork!


  • Belial Bloodrayne
    May 11, 2007
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    Wow.. you know.. you never did tell me how he died….. friends never leave someone behind


  • Dirty and Broken
    May 11, 2007
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    *hugs* i love you, ashley


  • gullionmar
    May 11, 2007

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    sad

    very sad indeed the loss of a friend is very painful sorry for your pain written well keep up the good work

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