Could the Gods be crying for me?
These tears that seem to love me so
and let me know?
I've felt so alone
But the rain..
Someone is crying
No sense denying
that maybe they love me
Are resting above me...
Someone knows I lay here broken
These words I've spoken to the rain
Comfort, almost sound devine
A blanket of liquid which I've been gifted
A kiss from Zeus
A taste of Aphrodite
I could not take their love so lightly
I hope it keeps raining
Until I drown in the smile I've been given
Because someone knows that I am here
though hidden
Keep raining..
Keep loving me...
Author notes
Option # 7
A contest entry
- 8 options of madness by McFairy.
2000 points, ended June 2, 2007, 44 entries
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Comments
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This is extremely different, a very beautiful write which is somehow really depressing yet inspirational at the same time! Thanks for entering!
***Strangeangel***
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