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There are a hundred things
that I could possibly say
that leave nothing
to the imagination
but something more to
the beats of your heart. 


When I push you away
I want you to pull me close
I just don't want you to
see me cry yet
because when you see it
I don't want you to
walk away


When you leave at night
after just coming
over
it breaks my heart
because it feels like
I could do better
I thought I was
but
maybe I'm just
fooling myself into
thinking that
I was doing ok

When you look in
my eyes
I want to cry mainly
because it's all still so
new
to have someone that wants
you to believe in him
as much has he believes
in you

So give me some time
to get used
to looks, the smiles
and
mostly the kisses
because you are my
dream come true
I don't want to wake
up
without you

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  • Clinging-to-Life
    May 17, 2007

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    this is a good write. I think the back ground is a little to bright, makes it kind of hard to read. But the poem its self was very good. thank you for entering.


  • Firegirl86
    May 14, 2007
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    Okay miss clare you need to stop these poems are AMAZING!!! lol no no no this one omg reminds me so much of nate it isn't even funny. Clare your talented very talented i can only write about nate and you got this amazing way of reading ppls minds or at least mine lol i will talk to you soon@!