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falling and afraid

he said i was the one that made him real
he said i made him act like the real him
he said all the things a guy should say
he said he really loved me, but that's ok
i know that things cannot last forever
i thought he was the one
so you can see why i'm hesitant
why i try to run
becasue your saying that you love me
and your doing all the right things
but everytime i've trusted
that's when you'd hear my screams
betrayed more that just once
the scars have left their mark
and i know you think that you can change my mind
but it's not up to you
it's up to me to breath again
love again
smile again
feel again
and i know that i could fall in love with you
but im afraid.

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  • Clinging-to-Life
    May 12, 2007

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    well well well

    Huh...this is a breif summary of how I'm feeling, or how I would Imagine I would be feeling if I were with someone. This is sad...and I understand and can relate with the feelings that come with the fear of falling for someone. Good work.