Can I control it?
Control my actions?
Control my thoughts?
Control my hatred?
And decide what is right,
and what is wrong.
Which way to go,
and who to trust.
Who is my friend,
and who is my enimy.
Who is lieing to me,
and who is not.
Who will hurt me?
And who will try to save me?
Save me from myself,
and from this darkness,
that consumes my heart and soul.
what do u think of it?
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Heh. I like this. It's a bit short but good things can come in small packages. I realy like this part:
Which way to go,
and who to trust.
Who is my friend,
and who is my enimy.
Who is lieing to me,
and who is not.
Who will hurt me?
And who will try to save me?
It's good. I can relate to this quite well. Keep writing.
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