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I'm In Love With You

You hold me and the world stops turning
Like the devils fire we never stop burning
Take my heart and prmise to keep me right
So i will never forget you thoughout the night

We are in love and we refuse to hide
For we both know that lfe is just a ride
It is not real and we cannot be hurt
Until our bodies are buried in the dirt

(We are the forgtten lovers)
Left in this world with nothing but each other
(We are the symbols of the heart)
Unable to breathe when we are pulled apart
(We are the shreds of romance)
Floating on the wind like a pocessed dance
(We are the blood in the veins of love)
Trapped in between the bad and the good

Every time my heart beats it speaks your name
This is one love that no one's to blame
We are both young and we are both foolish
To allow ourselves to surrender to this bliss

We're two people who promised to protect
The hearts that combined when we first met
Now i give unto you my heart and my soul
As long as you can say to me you'll not let them go

(We are the forgtten lovers)
Left in this world with nothing but each other
(We are the symbols of the heart)
Unable to breathe when we are pulled apart
(We are the shreds of romance)
Floating on the wind like a pocessed dance
(We are the blood in the veins of love)
Trapped in between the bad and the good

I'm in love with you (you have destroyed your heart)
I'm in love with you (you have reopened old scars)
I'm in love with you (you have let go of it all)
I'm in love with you (You have set yourslef up to fall)

(We are the forgtten lovers)
Left in this world with nothing but each other
(We are the symbols of the heart)
Unable to breathe when we are pulled apart
(We are the shreds of romance)
Floating on the wind like a pocessed dance
(We are the blood in the veins of love)
Trapped in between the bad and the good

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  • wanderingstarlet
    August 29, 2007

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    that's actually pretty good, and whoever got it should feel lucky to have you. sometimes, when you write something, you're so in the moment, it doesn't matter if its good or bad. as long as the feeling lasts, its all that matters. anywayz, good luck


  • The Hardest Goodbye
    August 8, 2007
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    great job on this poem. =) thanks for the entry.
    xo
    kandy


  • Lord Merlynn
    June 16, 2007
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    great job here. This reminds me of lyrics, and thats kewl. Great write.


  • rawrbby
    June 4, 2007

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    there is NO reason to be ashamed of this. it is so sweet and romantic. please please please spell check. up top there are a few words missing letters. other than that, it is amazing. thank you for entering!

  • OurxBeginning
    May 24, 2007

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    This is very good. A lot of emotion is in this and I can relate to the love in this, very sweet. Thank you for entering and good luck.


  • XXBrunettexBarbieXX
    May 22, 2007

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    this was a really great write....i really enjoyed reading this...your words were strong, powerful and emotional as welll..i liked this keep writting your talented and good luck in the contest

    ~Chrissy~

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