Counting the stars I spend
Every moment now and then
My journey starts from beginning to end
From end I hope to start my journey again.
Yesterday I looked forward for today
Now I wait for tomorrow
Empty...lonely and hollow
I Live without you
I want the sun to rise at night
And I want you again in my sight
I know you will come atleast once
If tomorrow ever comes.
A contest entry
- Titles/ lines/ inspiration/love!!! by mysterydragon.
300 points, ended May 12, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - B.E.S.T. by buggirl.
700 points, ended July 3, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Now this one is really appreciating......you're awesome.
"I want the sun to rise at night
And I want you again in my sight
I know you will come atleast once
If tomorrow ever comes."
We live in poetry, na? darun dosto. tumi ja lekho na!...awesome. you deserved that trophy.
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I truly enjoyed reading this poem. I was just browsing and the title caught me. I think the poem is absolutely beautiful. Wonderful! =]
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Thank you so much for your comment.
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this is so nice. it seems really simple when you first look at it, but its actually written with many different styles blended together very nicely. thanks for entering my contest!
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Thanks a lot for feeling my piece and commenting.I'm really glad you liked it.
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You'r asking for the impossible 'Shapla'.Neverthless it is touching. The thoughts we dream of do fulfill in our lone sad world.Apart from bitterness on the peel, an orange is sweet and delicious. We have to go something deeper into everything to enjoy the delicacy and sweet taste. thank you for sharing
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You are right we need to dig deeper in order to get enjoyment from anything. Thanks for commenting.
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"My journey starts from beginning to end
From end I hope to start my journey again."
Beautiful expression.
I also like the way it ends with hope.
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Thank you for reading. You know what? The lines you quoted here are my fav lines.
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