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Wonderful Nature

Have you ever seen a rainbow
after April showers?
Or dancing in the breeze
a field of wild flowers.
The roses, year by year they bloom
such beautiful colours and sizes.
They always give a good display
In crystal cut vases.
Snowdrops, so pale and frail
just spring up overnight.
No matter how cold it is
their timing is just right.
When you see golden leaves
you'll see the autumn glow.
Lovely to see  the rusty colours
before we see the snow.
The trees they stand so very tall
and look toward the sky,
sheltering the tired birds
as they get ready to fly.
Throughout Spring and Summer
Smell the perfume of the flowers.
Yet spring also sees us smiling
even during April showers.
God gives to all of us
this wonderful nature to see.
Let us all then embrace it
Lord God and  thank thee.

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  • Dee23
    September 16, 2007
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    Dee23

    Thank you both for your lovely comments. Glad you have read my poem


  • katie-jo
    September 15, 2007

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    beautiful. the rhyme wasn't forced at all, probably because it wasn't too consistent. that part could have been better, but otherwise great piece.

    Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
    ~kate


  • Entwining Beauty
    September 15, 2007
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    this is very beautiful good luck


  • Dreams27
    June 16, 2007
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    beautiful write! flows well, i enjoyed reading! take care, thanks for entering! Sam (Dreams27) xx


  • xXxWorthlessxXx
    May 18, 2007
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    this is great. God createed something so perfect, thanks so much for entering


  • poet2angels gold member
    May 14, 2007
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    lovely

    Such a sweet sound of nature and blessings in this poem...
    Simply lovely!

    Lynda

    • Dee23
      May 14, 2007
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      doreen H

      thanks for your kind comment


  • deep space
    May 11, 2007

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    a nice rhymn and flow to this poem.Nice to see your a seasonal nature lover as I am this is a real good poem and I enjoyed reading it,best wishes

    • Dee23
      May 11, 2007
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      doreen H

      Many thanks for your kind comments

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