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One More Kiss

Summertime is back here again,
Do you remember the memories way back when,
You make every part of me so alive,
I tried everything for us to survive,

Maybe I didn't try too hard and gave you less,
If I made a mistake, i will confess,
But right now I hope you bring back up high,
Up to my feet, up with you in the clear blue sky,

One more kiss may change your mind,
One more touch could make it this love alive,
One more chance could make it all come true,
But if I fail, I will always stay inside of you.

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I send out a prayer for those left behind

sup justin =D

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  • Ink4Blood
    June 18, 2007
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    *looks at you with suspisious eyes* who you?


    • Penz gold member
      June 20, 2007
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      u dont remember me? xD omg

      • Ink4Blood
        June 20, 2007
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        Penz, i do remember you. but when I was reading this piece for the contest, you're name didn't show because it was a blind contest.

        • Penz gold member
          June 21, 2007
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          oh i see.. lol, i don't know it was a blind contest and I didn't know that there we're blind contests already, how long have I been gone


  • StarEyes
    May 13, 2007
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    They will always be with us, and alive inside of us! You did a great reminding us of that! Thanks! Best of luck in the contest.

  • StarEyes
    May 13, 2007

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    They will always be with us, and alive inside of us! You did a great reminding us of that! Thanks! Best of luck in the contest.

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