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I never thought...

I never thought I'd love again
Not after the last guy walked away
I had fallen head over heals
And he knocked me down made me fall

I was never set an example
Of how love should be
I never understood it
So whats happening now
Am I falling in love

You scare me to death
Make me cry
But I love you
How can this happen
I don't want it to end like last time

I never thought I'd fall in love again
You make me scared that things won't be right
I've been though so much
You have to prove to me
That your the right guy

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  • Clinging-to-Life
    May 12, 2007

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    hmmm

    Well...this was an alright write. I believe that it could have used more imagery, and metaphors. But I do feel the emotion coming from here, and I have been there before. Nice job.