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nights
dress black
upon rook
await lucid
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fantasy purge snarls
of tiny winged fairies perch
set dragons feast on black birch
unfold the darkness
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not to yielding
to consort
its view
thought
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In a list
A contest entry
- ~* Poetry Formed VII *~ by Arkbear.
400 points, ended May 17, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hah, same, I had thought it was just a picture of a dragon. Buuut, once I found it, I loved it.
I think the poem had a nice flow, and I found it very interesting. Gave me the urge to ride a medieval poem for some reason.
Great Write!
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Thank u
Thank u for the gracious critique and comments.
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The poem itself was beautifully done. Elegant and graceful, a fantastic choice of words and a gentle flow. Something is wrong with the layout htough! I hade to slide across to see it, at first I thought it was just a picture!
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Thank u
Thank u for gracious comments and the critique given here to my poem. Haley27
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Very nice ~
Don't worry about the page mishap ~
Very nice Theme ~
Flow was good ~
Grammatical choices are well placed ~
The structure and aesthetic appeal is what I'm gonna
hit you on the most ~
I can see the efforts you put forth in this write ~
I hope you join us again in another contest with this form ~
If you re-read the rules....I am a stickler for this perfection
when it comes to Formed Poetry ~
This not bad though I must say ~
Much different than most of the other entries ~
Well done ~
( - .7 pts. )
SCORE: 9.3
Bear ~
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my poem went hayward on my page. Does this fit an arkquain form? Haley2
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Thank you for this Entry ~
Please forgive me ~
I can not acknowledge your entry
by a personal IM this time, because
this is an anonymous contest
and I don't have your names
in front of me ~
My mistake...I apologize ~
Perfect syllable count !
Thank you!
I can not say any more per say the rules ~
Reviews will come after the closing of this contest ~
If you have any questions about your entry,
please refer back to the Rules on the Contest Page ~
Thank you for taking the time to enter and
the best to you in this contest ~
Bear ~
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Interesting piece to be certain, nice flow to it although summin is up with the alignemetn and I thought it was blank till i noticed the bar at the bottom, maybe redo the background on this or summin.Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors.
Hetohke'e 
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Help!!
I tried to fix the font and slide everything in unionson, but lost control of the margins. Thank you for commenting. I guess I'll try that, since all fail I have nothing but time before it gets critique. Haley27
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wow that is a great smiley poem you must be talented
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Thanks
I tried to fit this smaller, but got out of hand. lol smile felt like dreaming. Thanks for the comment and the wow. Haley27
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well done
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I'm glad you liked my poem. This was not easy to do, but a challenge. Thank you for the comment. Haley27
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yeppers! great writing...keep on doing what you do so well! thank you for sharing. peace and light, Kendal
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thank you
First arkquain done here. Hope this fit as an arkquain poem. Thank you for commenting and the response toward my poem. Haley27
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This is done very well. Your rhythm fit your imagery perfectly, and the tone and structure and flow were all perfect. Great job.
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