Petals fall lightly,
Scatter grass with red velvet
Adorning the Earth.
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Petals fall lightly,
Scatter grass with red velvet
Adorning the Earth.
Thank you for entering my ku contest. You have painted a very vivid picture with this write. -
Nice Ku. Good on you.
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This is very beautiful imagery The form is good to I like this poem.
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Nice picture
I loved the picture that you painted with this haiku. I hope you take the time to read mine (not that I'm forcing you
). I entered one.
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this is great. this paints a nice picture in my min. thanks so much for entering
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Lovely, you have painted a wonderful picture and left this reader wondering the reason for the red carpet.
John -
Beautiful yet sad.
You have the 'ku skill.
You aren't half Japanese by any chance are you?
Stashed away in the mountains, under the tuition of some Zen master?
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