Nature's perfection
Omnipresent, unnoticed,
Destroyed by desire.
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OK, to answer your question: I liked Haiku initially because it got me out of a rut. I had writer's block for ages and it helped me overcome it.
Then I started to read more Haikus, and I started to appreciate it for the talent that lies behind the structure (of a good 'ku, anyway). A lot must be said for someone who can create something really thought provoking in 17 syllables.
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Well earned gold
You did create something thought provoking here. Well done.
Buddy
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Hey, congrats on your gold...This is a wonderful write and so true!
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I agree with your justification.
Of all the ones I have read this has been the most firey and thought provoking. Thank you for entering this competition. Very few have met the requirements yet you have not only met them but bright your personality through all of it, every step of the way. -
Nature's perfection
Omnipresent, unnoticed,
Destroyed by desire.
Thank you for entering my ku contest. Isn't it a shame that words and emotions like this even have to exist? -
This one is deep, too deep to be haiku, I think you have invented a newku lol
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