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Outside Wrap; Inside 'scoop'


Things are not always what they seem
(a saying old and familiar)
Yet, have you ever wondered why?
Why the Surface is so different?
So appealing to the (I)

To weigh a matter ('mystery batter'?)
Under closer scrutiny;
Clear - minus emotion
Null content
What an event that would be!
In motion (like an ocean) are our emotions
EVEN when it's not so plain to see...

Interesting creature, a human being;
Drawn to the Outside Wrap (Trap of things)
The master-design is flawless
Though trampled on by the lawless
However it's just part of the thing

Thinking 'deeper' than—"odd"?
Yeah, we occasionally nod:
"It's what's Inside that counts"...

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 12, 2007
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    A REAL CLASSIC...

    In my opinion this is classic,deep,real great poetry!


    • AsIThink gold member
      May 12, 2007
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      Welllllllll?

      Perhaps it is...I dunno. I DO appreciate your opinion though. Thank you (again).