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Now that your gone

In depths of me,
you lay before me,
In one day I had you in grasps,
now your gone and never to return.

At one time I thought that maybe,
one day I could hold you in my arms.
now your gone and I can't even touch you.

One day I shall join you,
but as for now I pray you don't hate me,
I was to be your mother one day,
now that your gone I can only cry.

I was to be the one,
that you were to call mom.
I was the one that would you would come crying to,
when ever you were hurt.

Now that your gone all I can do is sit here and hope.
Please my child do not hate me,
for I did not know.
that I would ever lose you.

I hoped that you would be a boy,
hopeing and praying that you would love me like I loved my mom,
I woundered how you would look, how you would sound,
Now that your gone all I can do is Cry.

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 28, 2007

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    awe you got me crying to this piec this was very out burt of deep emotions and feeling i was glad to read it love


    • ravenblade18
      July 28, 2007
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      thanks for reading in my of devastation it means alot that there are so many people that are touched by this poem and wish to comfort me. Thanks

  • mama-drama
    July 26, 2007

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    This is so sad!Am really sorry for what happened. One day am sure you will meet him.
    I know losing a baby is the worst thing possible.I know that because I have seen my sister go through the same thing and up until now she can't get over it.
    You shall find solace inw writing.

    I love the way you expressed yourself.This was very deep and emotional.
    It's a beautiful poem.

    • ravenblade18
      July 26, 2007
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      thank you, it took me a while to get over this as well, but the way things are looking I have another one the way, same dad so I know that this one will never replace the baby I lost but I will have something to give my love to once again. It's wierd losing a child, specialy when you've never meet them before, you know there their and feel them but you can't help but love them no matter what


  • Flo Varekai
    May 11, 2007
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    *hugs* I'll try and be on myspace this weekend.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    May 10, 2007

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    Oh my god that had to be hard for you to write, I have the chills and am all misted up. GREAT WORK!!


    • ravenblade18
      May 10, 2007
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      Thank you so much, It means alot that my readers under stand my pain thanks again ^^

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