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Slicing Fruit

like sleek razor's edge
against Adam's
bulging apple
is temptation
when given into

In a list

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  • Cupcrazy gold member
    June 18, 2007

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    This is quite wonderful, I loved the imagery and the compelling thoughts in this one. Deep and captivating. Thanks for this great entry. hugs, Bunny


  • sheltered
    June 18, 2007
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    Kill the bastard!


  • Malabu
    June 8, 2007

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    Guess there are many ways

    to slice an apple.....even adams....how profound is this thought of wanting to kill the lover who scorns you....as it was written....by eve....a woman scorned...is not to be taken lightly.....she will bite more than the apple....and pluck from the vine...the grapes that dangle from his thighs
    LOL
    Ok did I turn this into humor....
    love the thoughts though darkness looms
    Thank you for enterin this bitter truth
    Mal