In this dark place she calls her mind
Chians and locks are what bind
Her thoughts and her soul
Making it to where she'll never be whole
No one but her, she resides here
Keeping a safe distance so no one is near
Put here because of a fallen heart
One that tore her world apart
The dark surrounds her, the metal jingles
Something around her starts to giggle
A voice to her left, a voice to her right
One saying give up, the other says fight
The voices mulyiply, to many voices
Each giving her two or three choices
They get louder, more vocal
She cant comprehend them any longer
She screams and shouts
But they wont get out
She shakes and struggles
But they wont stumble
She cant get away, cant get them to leave
So many voices, who does she believe
She doesnt know what to do, shes falling apart
All by her whispers in the dark
Author notes
Whispers in the dark-Skillet. Lol i tried being creative but it didnt turn out so good
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- Song Inspired by Stormy Sky.
450 points, ended May 29, 2007, 7 entries
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cool
cool poem. i wismine were ood when they are as lon s this. o well gusse i'll have to try harder. good poem later.
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Well, I appreciate your spin on it. I thought it was lovely, but i just....idk. It's not really what I'm looking for in this song. Please note that this doesn't mean you automatically lose, everyone who's entered is neck in neck. Good write, good luck.
~stormy
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