no one will ever love me...
these words i know are true,
while they're all finding the one,
im left wondering what to do.
i say i don't care,
it doesn't matter anyway,
but all i want is just one guy,
who will always swear to stay.
i thought for once i had found him,
but he already found his one,
now my head and heart agree,
i'm finially done.
a lonely life is what i'm ment for,
so a lonely life it'll be,
as i whisper the haunting words,
no one will ever love me...
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it's true....i have friends who love me and some family who loves me...but thats not the kind of love i feel i need. i want to find that one guy who will just wipe my tears away and hold my hand....but unfortunatly i don't think he's out there......
Please tell me what you think
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I can find no love also
I can so relate to this poem. I feel like after my ex dumped me no one will ever love me again. I guess it just takes waiting. Because if you look you just find twisted freaks that know nothing about love. This is exactly where I am at this point in my life. Excellent write.
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everyone has someone, sometimes it just takes a while to find the rite 1. i have loved twice, but one left. i love her sooooo much, but now i have him, and hes the only thing i am living 4
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This is a beautiful poem, very well-written and expressed. I loved your wording and the beat is wonderful. I must say, though, that at 16, you're not supposed to find 'the one.' I've always figured that it's designed so that you don't find your "one guy" until you're financially ready to start a household, and you're YEARS away from that. Trust me. You'll be fine. Besides, why would you want to tie yourself to a life partner during the years where you get to become independent and celebrate and discover yourself? I know you're lonely, and that's normal. But thinking that because you don't have it all right now, it means you'll never get it, is setting yourself up to make certain that comes true. Take a deep breath. As long as you understand that you deserve to be loved, you will be. It doesn't matter when or how. You'll be okay. Don't try to grow up yet, it's really not that fun. TRUST ME.
*crushing hugs*
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thankyou so much! i know that i'm not spoused to really find the one yet..or even truly fall in love...i know that in my head...but my heart, my hearts not there yet.that again just shows how young i am...anyway thanks for commenting!
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sweetheart your only what 15 16 the same age me. its out there. you havent had the time to find it. the thing is you cant look for. you have to go thro life and live it to its fullest and love will find you. this is a really good poem to btw i loved the last stanza even tho it was sad.
jess
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i know...sometimes though it's just like...i feellike i don't deserve to be loved which means i never will be...i know this isn't true but sometimes...sometimes i just feel like it is.
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oh....I wish I could be that guy for you...but...you knoww how it is....I promise to find you one day
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mike your amazing but don't make promises if you don't know that you can keep them.
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I will. I owe you to much.
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you owe me nothing love
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I owe you my life
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if you owe me yours, i'd owe you mine...
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no.you stopped me from killing myself. i can never repay u for that
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be happy. live a long, happy life and never give up on yourself or on love and thats more than enough.
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only if you do the same
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