Passion, faith
Love, trust
Was it love
Or merely lust
Monday I saw you
Tuesday we kissed
By Wednesday you were gone
You were the one I missed
Those passionate eyes
Staring deep into mine
Our hands
Were lovingly intertwined
In the dead of the room
I was watching you
Feeling so special
I only wish you knew
By Saturday you were gone
In the blink of an eye
I'll never have you again
No matter how hard I try
Crying seems to be
All that I do
Wishing you were mine
Crying over you
Author notes
But you can't make someone love you...
A contest entry
- Emo word bank by xlilliexdiesx.
425 points, ended May 24, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gothic Love by Xsafety glassX.
327 points, ended September 9, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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i have that same problem...anyway, finalists to u. this wuz soooo AWESOME!!
thanx for entering -
Love is weird....
Love gets the best & the worst of us, guys love us, hate us, love us, hate us, love us, and then leave us. Either way the world still manages to go round!! GREAT WRITE!!!!
Holly Noel
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WOA! i really like it but unfortunaltly you need to go back and read the rules and change acordingly then send me a meassage
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wow.....
WOW sweet-heart, this is such a GREAT poem im really loving it, keep up the awsome work and ya love is hard and painful, but like i say " with love there is pain, but with no pain there is no love" luvs...xxxx=)
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