(starts with the sound of a hammer and screaming, then the sound of hauling something up)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! (Nails ripping out and jumping down)
Pre-chorus
I have come to save
to keep you out of your grave
But you didn't follow
my words you couldn't swallow
Chorus
So instead YOU will pay
You will face judgement day
I recomend you pray
Cuz i won't come to save the day
Verse 1
I came to see
what the world had become
and all i wanted to do
was just to run
just to escape
from all this hate
and all the sin
on me that you tried to pin...
and to think...
Pre-chorus
I had come to save
to keep you out of your grave
But you didn't follow
my words you couldn't swallow
Chorus
So instead YOU will pay
You will face judgement day
I recomend you pray
Cuz i won't come to save the day
Verse 2
You're lucky it wasn't me
That God sent to save your ass
Cause the time would have come
And i would have just let it pass
Pre-chorus
I had come to save
to keep you out of your grave
But you didn't follow
my words you couldn't swallow
Chorus
So instead YOU will pay
You will face judgement day
I recomend you pray
Cuz i won't come to save the day
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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once again, fantastic. It pinpoints the faults of the Jews during Christ's crucifiction. There's something we can all take to heart in this, if only we would listen.
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this is great! I loved it.
(I entered your contest I called it For you My Dear) -
This is awesome!!! I really love the chorus. nice job keep it up!!
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Oh very nice, didn't know that you wrote songs. Wish i could. But really nice piece you got here it was really good. Nice rhyme scheme and everything. I like this. Great job
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Very well done! Great song!
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cool
i like it great job dude
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Wow!!!
This is sooo awesome, Shane! Like..I can't even describe how much so!!! Fantastic Job!!!! Keep it up!!
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dude i like this! its awsome!
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nice
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