Outside right now,
It is so cold
Inside at the moment
It's like a blizzard
The winds are sharp
Like razors and with
Each piece of ice
Slices through skin
I'm in fear of eyes
Of those watching me
They follow me around
Giving me a feeling
Of terror, one that
I've never felt before
It's a Thursday, and
It's also dark
This room makes me
Seem like I'm all
Alone in this world
My heart is pounding
Harder than anything
All love in my body
Drained away with a
Knife of harm
Now everything is
Just red and black
Nothing else
Music is playing
In the background
I'm crying because
Of the harsh pain
Life is rushing
So far away from me
My last words:
I'm sorry
Author notes
i've never tried to write emo, but when i saw the wor bank, i had to try. hope u like it!
Jeneralix
I don't know
A contest entry
- Emo word bank by xlilliexdiesx.
425 points, ended May 24, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hey line 8 says slices throught skin shouldn't eat be through the skin or through skin not throught? Just trying to help you out. Love ya mucho!
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Good job writing emo. LOL. I think this is a really good poem. I like how you put with each piece of ice slashing through the skin, I can just feel myself doing that and feel the sharp, slashing pain. Love yas!!
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Good Job, sounds like something I should do. I really like it it fits me.
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good job on your first emo poem. I like it. but please go back and read the rules again and change acordingly. then send me a message telling me. thank you
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