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Listen and Learn

It happened long ago
but just now it all comes back
I want to feel better
this memories flood back
just like the tears she used to cry
Help her through this
She needs the help
I know just what to do
listen to advice
and get help from me
listen to me for all that you need
Talk about what happened
no matter how hard it is
I am here for you
just like everyone else
We can help you
Help you heal
and deal with the pain
No matter what Happens
We are all here for you
Listen to us
Here our voices
don’t listen to the memories
as they flood back
Dam them to a stop
Put a brick wall
right in its way
We are here to help
Listen and learn

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  • fallenangel671
    May 11, 2007

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    exellent poem dear this was an awesome write and i loved this,
    my favorite part would have to be
    Talk about what happened
    no matter how hard it is
    I am here for you
    just like everyone else
    We can help you
    Help you heal
    and deal with the pain
    No matter what Happens
    We are all here for you
    Listen to us
    Here our voices
    this was an excellent part and i loved your encouraging words in it, and yes dear i am trying to talk about it with everyone on ap, i am planning to write a poem late tonight when no ones around in my house, i have wrote one about it already and published it on here just recently. but i loved your encouraging words in this poem
    keep writing
    good luck in the contest


    ~Ashley~<3