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Sage's Skyscape

Enter My world,Enter my sky

An everlasting World

Where we cant die

Where a smile

And A dream

Of a puddle

Becomes a Stream

Where you can face

Your fear

Love all

Who draw near

Where an eagle

Becomes a Phoenix

and Lion

Becomes a Cat

In my world

Made by all Of my tears

Where You Hear with Your eyes

And see With Your ears

Where Dark

And Light

Love and

Not fight

Where we may love

Where we may dare

Where we do not need

To breathe air

Where your troubles are done

Your regrets are none

wanting to open myself

to let you know everything

Freedom and joy

On a chariot do I bring

And Bring you here

To this world Of happiness and love

Maybe just like

Our own paradise from above

In this world

Of Reform and Reshape

Can I call it my home

My Skyscape







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Its a contest poem, that not really in a contest......I wrote it for alot of people...and for alot of things...I am SO confuzzled.

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  • PoeticallyTintedSml
    May 14, 2007

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    ... you would be able to enter my contest if... you would have used thoes 2 lines that i said that you had to add...

    i love this poem... very good write...

    ~Wind~


  • DeathByAnAngel
    May 11, 2007
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    hey hun... how r ya?

  • DeathByAnAngel
    May 11, 2007

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    wow... its amaazing... i was grinning the whole way through.. dont know why
    much love hun...((((((((liz)))))))))