A spirit filled with love
Never hesitates to give,
Nor hesitates to laugh,
Nor hesitates to live.
A spirt filled with life
Has own arms opened wide.
Never failing to achieve
To love and to abide.
A spirit filled with me
Is small and all alone.
A spirit filled with God
Sends love down to the bone.
So when you dearly need advice,
And come to me for help,
Remember tis not mine own to give,
But the Lord's own spirit of life.
Author notes
I wrote this after I got confirmed.
A contest entry
- Spiritual Splendour by Angels Delight.
680 points, ended June 18, 2007, 16 entries
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Well Done
My Dear Poet
This was truly a beautiful piece of writing as I know that feeling all too well...Sometimes we forget to go to God with our problems...We seem to think our friends and family will have a better solution only to find they don't...
I want to thank you for entering my contest and I wish you only the best of luck
Much Love
Tessa
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