Chemical insomnia
All she needs is the perfect coma
Obsessive compulsive freak outs
Over something that never happened
Hallucinations
the color of rainbows
plague her day dreams
Hallucinations
black and white
plague her love schemes
her sanity fading
with the setting sun
Chemical insomnia
the drugs of her nightmares
have just begun
Author notes
I used the words provided as inspiration
A contest entry
- Pretty Little Rag Doll. by yesterdaysfeelings-.
750 points, ended June 15, 2007, 81 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow....i love this poem...it is SO awesome...i love it...its just like the best thing ever...
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thankyou this is fabulous. =]. i can honestly say that this is 1 of my favorites in the contest [[probably because everyone goes into contest looking for something and well. this is alot like what i was looking for.]] thankyou for taking the time to use some of the words! and thanks for entering.
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Very interesting. you write very well, though a little oddly. I never thought of it as insomnia.
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